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Zzzzzz ‘beware’ation

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Sharing a life together
In your marital bliss (or bliss was never?)
You kiss her before going to office.
She cooks for you, does all the washing
And bears your child.
Do you give her enough attention?
Or are you in need of this 'beware'ation?

Is the woman your call your own
Thinking of you when she’s alone?
Does she see you in her dreams?

Beware you unaware husbands
While you are at work
Earning those bucks, she might be
In her fantasies with another He.

He kisses you before going to office
A Mama’s boy that’s what he is.
You wait for his salary and spend it freely.
And you Share a life together
In supposed marital bliss (or missing bliss) .
Does he fulfill your whims and fancies?
Or are you in need of this 'beware'ation?

Is the man you call your husband
Thinking of you when at work?
Or does he dream of another woman holding his hand?

Beware you innocent wives
While you share your bed,
Your life, He might be
Thinking of another man’s wife.

Sharing a life together,
You may fake it in your marriage;
But no matter how hard you try
You cannot get inside your spouses head,
And find out whom they’re thinking of
When they lie with you on the bed
So just Beware…
…Because what you see is not what you always get!

(10 July 2006)

PS - I don't think Bewareation is a word. I used it in this poem beacuse it sounds good to me, even though it might not exist. LoL

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catastrophe King 29 August 2006

Since, I did not find any new poems written and launched by you today - i decided to read one of your older ones and came across this one. First of all.... a 10 here! I agree with Amber here that it truly is an interesting subject to write on and that you did it so early is so much more admirable. The wordings are excellent and you did deserve this long journey as a poet... God Bless You! !

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Abigail Keller 15 July 2006

Hey, I really liked this poem. Interesting subject and extremely great wording. ~Amber~

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Gina Onyemaechi 14 July 2006

A humorous/serious piece of writing. And thanks for your comment on my poem, Preeti. Best wishes, Gina.

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IT EXISTS NOW, & WITH YOUR COPYRIGHT TO WEBSTER ON IT DEAR PREETS! I LIKE IT TOO...HEY, ITS POETRY...IF YOU WRITE IT...IT COUNTS..TIS ALL..NICE STORY, PRETI, ANOTHER JOB VERY WELL DONE! FRANK/FJR

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