If you refuse
to believe in yourself,
you can't expect anyone else
to do it for you
...
"a heart"
when it opens for you, when an ear listens to you,
when a look responds to you
the epitome of happiness only
...
the words i write for you
from the depth of my heart
are neither read by you
nor it reaches your heart
...
no matter how brightly i may one day shine
among the milky ways
i will never feel the warmth coming back to me
through the distance
...
it was always time
time, time, time
today, tomorrow,
getting to work on time
...
Home Is Just A Person
It's amazing
how sometimes home
is just a person
Brevity and depth. That is what we find in Puti Ira's poetry. Her poetry reveals the unknown layers of human nature. Well done, Dear Poet.
'The Leaf Was Bored' is extremely interesting and meaningful. Thanks, Dear Poet.
i liked caterpillar poem, but, alas, you 'do not wish to receive comments'! ! well, it IS your choice. i liked the poem, which sounds more (to me) like a 'quote' or 'old saying'. i DID send it to MyPoemList, but i almost never 'rate' with a number, and i did not this time. Jez, below, may be correct; maybe you ARE a 103 year old on her way to poetic greatness! ? bri :)
if i open myself up to you, know that means you're very special to me... as puti ira told to me...............................EXCELLENT WORDS..............greetings from the DUTCH Poetess SFC and from The Evangelist and from The WORLD Traveler.......................Rhank you for reading and understanding
........I thank God that I may read your poems, dear Irra. TWO THUMBS UP for this amazing Song Truth is the right path and a lonely one......................? ? ................With GOD we are NEVER lonely, Amen... puti ira............God's Blessings in Abundance be upon you and your Beloved family.
The Right Path - IS TRUTH and GOD IS THE ONLY TRUTH, GOD is also LOVE and BOTH we can find that in the BIBLE, also known as The Holy Scriptures..................Sylvia Frances Chan, Ditch Poetess, Evangelist and World Traveler......
i am the poem that found life with your pen and your heart... puti ira..................WONDERFUL and a thought-provoking poem, well, IF we may not write here, you as the poem will have found no life at all. WHERE ELSE could we express our thoughts about YOU and your poem. T.Q. A 10 Full VOTE for you as THE POEM. G.B.U. Amen. Friendly Christmas greetings beforehand, Sylvia FC
Puti is a very talented poet. Her Trade Mark is two line poem, in which she is able contain an ocean full of poetry. Highly imaginative, very profound, often philosophical. Mind boggling expressions. It is a wonder how she works magic with her choice of just a few words...