Skylar Beet

Rookie (October 28 1995 / Myanmar)

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My name is Skylar, i am 16 at the moment
i go to mililani High school in hawaii
my first poem was a rap, shared it with my youth group and they loved it, so that inspired me to write more.
i have lived in 6 different countries but traveled to more then 20 countries, dad is NOT military, hes in hotel business so we move a lot. Therefore i have international friends living all over.I ... more »

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  • Louis Kasatkin (1/7/2012 3:29:00 AM)

    Dark-It was good of you to provide guidance for yopur reader in the footnote.The tone and style of this poem reminded me of the narrative songs of The Hold Steady.Urban alienation etc. The only editorial advice I can give is try and avoid extended lines, stick to 6 words per line.

  • Skylar Beet (1/4/2012 7:26:00 AM)

    What do you think? :) hoped you liked it :) THANKS for reading

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Fire Of The Holy Spirit!

FIRE! FIRE! consume in ME!
Holy Fire stir up, be free
IGNITE the living FIRE!
That my soul DESIRES
Holy Spirit, who I can not see
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For you have Glory, Praise and Fame
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Has no boundaries or limits
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