Paradise Girl Poem by tanya gupta

Paradise Girl

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when i opened my eye,
i was free from the world,
now i am here on paradise,
living as a paradise girl.

now, my friend,
i'll tell you one tale,
where i lived before,
was a land of male.

when i opened my eye in that world,
there was no importance of an innocient girl.
i was a small baby,
very innocient and a little bit shabby.

they deamed me as a part of curse,
where i was a little crying versed.
i hoped of something new,
but to understand this there were very few.

i did'nt knew what was boy and girl,
but being a cursed female,
they judged me out of that world.

now, i was grown up,
holding pains like a cup,
making my own dramatic world,
which could be possible within a girl.

i had nothing but the blood tears,
as well as the dreadfull fears,
new thoughts new dreams were developing,
but that world was enough,
to cut them with emotional sheers.

where i wanted to become something in life,
they hanged on my head an annis knife.
they tought me that the world was set up by males,
and a girl borns to face the erratic ails.
it really very much pains,
when uprooted desire constantly fails.

they pretended their world as motherland,
but not given me the rights to stand on land.
a name of girl was given to the great things,
but stopped me to fly with having wings.

the world that worships a ladylord,
was binding me with the biff cords,
this respect was of no use,
which was making their minds totaly fuse.
but i wanted to change the aspects of a girl,
because she is a pennyless pearl.

i lived in the world below,
curious for my faults to know,
half of my life was almost done,
but i never got my fault a single one.

after all i grew angry,
protesting for girls,
to know why the world was hungry.
they were not the men to dwell in the human form,
given me the pains,
which i have ever worn.

i did'nt wanted to live in that world,
keeping all things beside,
i came to the decision of sucide,
and after all i am here on paradise.

this is an unseen and unlisted story,
you may not believe its true,
and yet you may learn a lesson,
if it will happen to you.


but now, i am happy here,
with having no any fear,
i am flying as a bird in the air,
now everyone has to hear,

that everygirl have some tend,
except breathing all things are ban,
please god, give them some mind on lend,
because life is coming to the harshfull end,
harshfull end.

Thursday, February 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: girl
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
we think that social issues with girls have been sorted out but while being a girl, i'll say 'no' not yet.by this poetry i am trying to convey a story of every common girl, how a girl borns and how and where she finds peace.actually, the plants of that social issues have been cut out but still the roots are alive, and one time these roots will become the cause of heavy destructions.i am an aspiring poet and writer and writing is my passion and as well as my life.
i want to become a writer who can challenge every wrong mentality.please let me overcome all my dreams of becoming a writer who can drive a good change.PLEASE VOTE ME AND GIVE ME YOUR VALUABLE VIEWS IF YOU ALSO BELIEVE IN CHANGE.THANKYOU..
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 28 February 2014

I can understand your feelings being a girl......tanya.......your crusade against female abuse is a holy one and through your creative writing you can change negative mind trends a lot.........a good cause for good read......

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Thomas Vaughan Jones 06 March 2014

Tanya, this is a true anthem for female emancipation. A hundred years ago, in England, we had a lady named Emily Pankhurst. She too stood for womankind, and eventually won women the right to vote. She would have been proud to know you. Keep writing.

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Subhakanta Sahu 26 March 2014

Oh paradise girl, don't feel that girls are separate from the boys in this physic world. really we have to change the notion of our society with a little attempt like this.

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Yash Shinde 26 March 2014

great beautiful poem...I pray that eventually your struggle might work for the betterment of the society

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V P Mahur 28 March 2014

Dear Tanya, I would just say WAO! great poem with elaborate thoughts. Congratulations on reaching top 20 Indian poets you are not far behind. I wish you come up to pass by me. Good luck. Reply soon. You have a big bulk to read no. of my poems is now above 300. Thank!

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Ritushri Dinger 24 April 2014

Beautifully presented...

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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 16 April 2014

A great message for the society.....well written....keep it up...

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Tanya Guleria 09 April 2014

I understand what you mean, although in Europe this problem is not so sharp.

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Sudhanshu Shekhar 05 April 2014

Hi Tanya, writting poem is important.

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Valerie Dohren 30 March 2014

Well said Tanya - the world still has a great deal to learn, and a great deal to account for over this issue.

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