Words Beyond Boundaries. Poem by tanya gupta

Words Beyond Boundaries.

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when happiness can't be won,
to satisfy ourselves we are the one.

sometimes things are not as we see,
because those things aren't as they seem.
the heart says to sit in the rain,
eventually it relieves the pain.

here comes the need for someone to be there,
because the people aren't just fair.
sometimes we need a hand of support,
whenever we fail for the time to afford.
and this hand becomes all to get by,
especially when wishes continue to die.

sometimes when happiness goes too far,
it's difficult to find where you are.
everytime this happen leaves some trace behind,
which others can't even ever find.

sometimes when you are trapped in the game of bluffs,
the things which can help you out, are the dreamy stuffs.
but you need not to run away,
because its real time to find the way.

believe in yourself, don't lose your confidence,
somewhere ages and ages hence,
happiness is hidden down the shelf.

from the colour of dreams,
colour your own world,
because you are not meant to be hurled.

believe me,
sometimes when people get hurt,
even the strongest may need comfort.
and when the things make you deplore,
you just need your brain and heart to explore.

Friday, February 21, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: inspirational
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this is the poem to make everyone learn that hard times come to everyone but depend on you how hard you are moulding them,
i know hard times are very hard to handle but if you'll not stand up for these times then you are only making yourself weak.
this is to show that, one is not the only one who suffers, there are many, some get by and some do not.always remember happiness grows more fonder after experiencing bad times.
so always allow bad times to come towards you to experience happiness with some more excitement and joy, and also don't care for others who don't know how you experience problems they brought to you.
enjoy yourself and your life, be great be different...thanks
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitava Sur 02 March 2014

Wise words consoling the wounded hearts, suggesting to look forward...... nice one

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Hazel Durham 03 March 2014

Yes we have to be strong and move forward with love in our hearts and to be not afraid to be different, to have courage to make a good life for ourselves! Good write with so much wisdom!

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Abhishek Tiwari 04 March 2014

Nice.. Poem tanya.. U Have got a nice vision.. Keep it up... And keep writing..

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V P Mahur 05 March 2014

Dear Tanya Lovely note of moral encouragement for those who are frustrated for some reasons Thanks But You are not posting your new poems for a long time why? I am posting at least 5 poems daily come on and have faith in your creativity. Thanks

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Utsav Patel 07 March 2014

This is your best poem so far.. I love the way its written and the spirit... Keep it up dear.. :)

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Prabal Dev 12 May 2014

A very good write indeed. Sure, happiness gives even more pleasure when it comes as a gift on our victory over the bad times.

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Md Elias Uddin 12 April 2014

from the colour of dreams, colour your own world I'll try, Tanya! Go on. And Mike Barret is a true source of inspiration and guidance.

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Mike Barrett 01 April 2014

Great ideas expressed here - the words however the grammar and spelling could be a bit more polished. You have a poet's heart! Cheers!

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Nika Mcguin 31 March 2014

the heart says to sit in the rain, eventually it relieves the pain. Apparently we have some likened views, I said something similar in my poem Nature of Self I also love these lines: sometimes when you are trapped in the game of bluffs, the things which can help you are the dreamy stuffs. something about the phrase dreamy stuffs lol I love that. ~Nika

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Twinkle Thomas 31 March 2014

very inspiring one...tanya..! !

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