Longing wings, gone and passed
Weak flapping, will go to pile the sense?
In an obstacles range, will not be lost
Although not one promise, keep eternal - definitely
Turmoil sense often sprawled
Kept moving, go through, no time to be doubt
Like fireflies in the darkness night
Splash the light, albeit dimly - certainly
Realities faint-sigh resignedly
Face's shadow pull over the logic of me
The spaces of hope, the nuances of sense
Flood spilled, filled the soul - oh, is this love?
Like the rainbow, you had been chosen
Morning's silhouette, iridescent
No regrets, despite not being
Because loving you is greatest gift - my beloved lady
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With beautiful imagery that conveys your deep love so wonderfully expressed! !
A love so deep and true it lights up the night like fire flies. Yes love is the greatest gift of all for without it we would probably perish. Love is truly like the color of rainbow. It shines in and through our hearts. A very enlightening write.
a beautiful love poem. the last stanza is a perfect ending to your love poem. 10
Nothing matters when one is deeply in love! That's why it is often said 'love is blind'! A very passionate write! ! Enjoyed! !
I think love must be described in that way, simple, sincere and strong. Very good, your Lady must be happy poet! !
Love kindles the imagination and such beautiful lines are created. Fireflies in the dark and morning silhouettes are beautiful images.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful rhymes, love is the greatest gifts, not all can fell and see that, only artists can grow!