adheez van der beanthz

Rookie - 16 Points (27 May 1980)

Room Hope For My Beloved

Longing wings, gone and passed
Weak flapping, will go to pile the sense?
In an obstacles range, will not be lost
Although not one promise, keep eternal - definitely

Turmoil sense often sprawled
Kept moving, go through, no time to be doubt
Like fireflies in the darkness night
Splash the light, albeit dimly - certainly

Realities faint-sigh resignedly
Face's shadow pull over the logic of me
The spaces of hope, the nuances of sense
Flood spilled, filled the soul - oh, is this love?

Like the rainbow, you had been chosen
Morning's silhouette, iridescent
No regrets, despite not being
Because loving you is greatest gift - my beloved lady


Submitted: Sunday, August 11, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, August 27, 2013

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  • Rookie - 258 Points Poetheart Morgan (8/14/2013 12:14:00 PM)

    I think love must be described in that way, simple, sincere and strong. Very good, your Lady must be happy poet! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 16 Points Yasmeen Khan (8/14/2013 10:39:00 AM)

    Love kindles the imagination and such beautiful lines are created. Fireflies in the dark and morning silhouettes are beautiful images. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 110 Points Chandana Khan (8/12/2013 4:46:00 AM)

    Like the rainbow, you had been chosen
    Morning's silhouette, iridescent
    No regrets, despite not being
    Because loving you is greatest gift - my beloved lady
    very nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 7,301 Points Valsa George (8/11/2013 11:18:00 PM)

    Nothing matters when one is deeply in love! That's why it is often said 'love is blind'! A very passionate write! ! Enjoyed! ! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,363 Points Patricia Grantham (8/11/2013 4:27:00 PM)

    A love so deep and true it lights up the night like fire flies. Yes love
    is the greatest gift of all for without it we would probably perish. Love is
    truly like the color of rainbow. It shines in and through our hearts.
    A very enlightening write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Halsho Zangana (8/11/2013 1:47:00 PM)

    Beautiful rhymes, love is the greatest gifts, not all can fell and see that, only artists can grow! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 864 Points Sallam Yassin (8/11/2013 12:36:00 PM)

    the love is making the world
    going around
    as her love is great
    your song is great too (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 864 Points Maria C. Costa (8/11/2013 9:12:00 AM)

    I love the images used. They shed light coming from the poet's soul towards his Beloved.
    Lovely thread! Keep being hopeful and inspired. Thanks a lot for sharing it.
    Best regards
    Maria (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Rajendran Muthiah (8/11/2013 8:30:00 AM)

    It is not lost facing a range of obstacles. It is eternal. It splashes light briefly. A faint hope yet fills the soul to keep alive. The colourful silhouette vanishes soon. But loving her itself is a great gift. Am I right Mr. Adheez? Your poems are matured writes. The last line, a flash of your beautiful heart, is the theme of this poem. Excellent.
    ***** (Report) Reply

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