Aditi Khandelwal

Rookie - 1 Points (December 27 1997)

Forgive Me - Poem by Aditi Khandelwal

Like puff of smoke you went away
One moment near then far away.
There is a hollow space where my heart should be
Words can give more pain, now can you see?

I know what my mistake was
I have said sorry of course
Still you didn’t talk to me
Forgive me- I plead to you falling on my knee

Just give me one last chance to talk to you,
I will tell you everything I ever wanted to.
Just give me one last chance to admire you,
So that like a sweet memory I can remember you.

Please don’t ignore me,
Let the past be.
Give me one last chance and forgive me,
My soul cries out to you, can you see?

Comments about Forgive Me by Aditi Khandelwal

  • Rookie - 94 Points Aman Arora (1/21/2014 8:47:00 AM)

    You are very poetic. Simple words, but always in rhythm. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 2 Points Sagar Shelar (2/16/2012 10:40:00 AM)

    Really heart's close poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Sanu Puthupallil (2/12/2012 12:22:00 AM)

    sometimes.....we can't to forgive, even we can't forgive our loved one it may be because of the deep wound inside our mind...........but it doesn't mean that we hate them....we forgive them for 100 times inside our mind, , , , but doesn't show it outside.......that is the real love....
    a great poem dear.....which reveals your pain (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 525 Points Vipins Puthooran (2/11/2012 10:46:00 AM)

    forgiveness can heal the wounded heart/
    Really a wonderful poem! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,093 Points Wahab Abdul (2/9/2012 11:26:00 PM)

    MAGICAL POEM, I LIKE IT, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 306 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (2/1/2012 9:38:00 PM)

    Wonderful poem, i like it! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 22 Points Lasoaphia Quxazs (1/31/2012 1:16:00 PM)

    Very good poem. well written. You are a lovely soul. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 29, 2012

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