How Could I.. Poem by adheez van der beanthz

How Could I..

Rating: 4.4


how could I deny the morning
when your eyes looked so pristine
pierced deep into the heart
calmed the entire emotions

how could I deny the dusk
if your smile is a cloud portrait
strands of the charming strophe
that I read in the library of love

how could I deny the night
whilst the moon is the hopes
the light that you entrusted
till I don't get lost

how could I deny the rain
while the sun come for toast
to the frozen-doubt bodies
are refract the longing into you

yeah you..
whose stop my world


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 06 February 2013

A very sweet relationship created with nature and love. Both beauties mesmerize with equal intensity. Lovely poem. thanks for sharing.

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Unwritten Soul 06 January 2014

You wrote it freely from your mind...like let it go and release all from all things inside, how could i..how could i be cruel to say its is not good because it was a nice work from you adheez_Soul

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Mark Dillon 19 February 2013

Really enjoyed this, sweet, concise, meaningful.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 14 February 2013

Lovely piece.

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Kelvin Owusu 11 February 2013

Beautiful piece of poetry a lovely read

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Malaya Roses 07 February 2013

Lovely thoughts made this poem so beautiful and always fresh for re-reading.

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