Adam McKim

Rookie - 222 Points (11/12/1984)

Moving On - Poem by Adam McKim

Moving on is so hard to do,
What can I do, I can't live without you.

Crying in my soul, dying in my heart,
Screaming in my head, why are we apart.

Moving on is tearing me up,
People all around me wishing me luck.

Nobody understands what is going on,
During sleepless nights, until the early dawn.

I try to move on but nothing yet,
Everywhere I turn, I'm caught in a net.

Wandering, staggering, depressed with my life,
Moving on, it cuts like a knife.


Comments about Moving On by Adam McKim

  • Rookie - 31 Points Christine Blaydes (3/28/2012 12:16:00 AM)

    A broken heart is hard to mend,
    Unless you have a trusted friend. =D (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Apphia Grimonia (3/20/2012 1:12:00 AM)

    i'm in love with your poem...it's great..really true..moving on, it cuts like a knife (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,962 Points Soulful Heart (3/15/2012 5:15:00 AM)

    sounds depressed but at least it made u a poet. :) stars glitter only in darkness remember? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 15, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 1, 2012


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