adheez van der beanthz

Rookie - 42 Points (27 May 1980)

Poetry And Weather - Poem by adheez van der beanthz

like poetry
life isn't about explanation
it all about the words
that you chosen
same like a clime
you can't change the weather
but you can change
the wind direction


Comments about Poetry And Weather by adheez van der beanthz

  • Rookie - 33 Points Mark Dillon (2/19/2013 5:17:00 AM)

    it's good, i like to think poetry tries to explain life through your eyes at a point in time, your take on certain aspects.Thats what makes us all unique, that we see from different directions and learn to appreciate the other views, enjoyablt piece, thank you. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,488 Points Savita Tyagi (2/18/2013 10:32:00 AM)

    Enjoyed the comparison. Written very nicely. Thanks for sharing your new poems. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,486 Points Patricia Grantham (2/18/2013 9:50:00 AM)

    I like this poem, short and sweet. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 946 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (2/18/2013 7:54:00 AM)

    It is so wonderful to see Poetry and Weather being compared.You can't change the weather but you can change the wind direction- are lines of beauty! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Kelvin Owusu (2/11/2013 3:39:00 AM)

    nicely written an interesting piece (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 385 Points Maria C. Pires Costa (2/8/2013 6:04:00 AM)

    Interesting comparisons you've created regarding poetry and life as well as poetry and weather. Life is in poetry, as you know. The words one uses in poetry are personal choices like steps one chooses in life... As for the weather comparison- You can't change the weather / but you can change your wind direction. Hope the winds in your life can always be favourable!
    Keep up reflecting on life and poetry. Thanks! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 7, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, March 1, 2013

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