Maddi Eden

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  • Shanker Jwala Shanker Jwala (7/11/2006 11:42:00 PM)

    thanks for your comments.i like u & your beautiful comments.u r a great poet i know which i see your poems. u r so cute girl i like it. your skill is too much.
    i am student of poem. i didnt have study english language. so english language is difficult to me. if u teach me i will grateful to u.
    hannah, please help me to teaching me ok?
    bye hannah. nice to meet u.

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Best Poem of Maddi Eden

First Blood

Hushed whispers
Of my elders
What are they talking about?

Illumination.
Ew, so gross!
Why would girls put up with it?

Anticipation.
Don't let me be last.
I want to be a real woman.

Realisation.
That first clot of blood.
Forever etched in my memory.

My time of the month - 'I can't swim today, Mamma'
'Why not? ' the little ones clamour
A mysterious smile: oh, just a girl thing.

An annoyance.
To be avoided - left without provision -
Darnit! should have kept an eye on the calendar.

I guess it's all part of growing ...

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Listening

She stands, so still, so poised
Hears their voices - wait!
Don't make a sound.

Listens.
Every other word comes to her ears - oh God!
But it's enough.

She runs back to her room.