Molay Toufik

Molay Toufik Poems

1. Funny Wear, Steel Soldiers 1/11/2012
2. Love Speaks 12/16/2011
3. Deep Feeling 12/17/2011

Comments about Molay Toufik

  • Nicki Luvetti (1/23/2012 6:37:00 PM)

    I love that you try so hard with your english to deliver this truly incredible poem to the world. I agree with Jack Green... I don't know if anything more poetic exists that truly comes from the heart... If you wouldn't mind, I would love it if you could critique my poetry... -nicki

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  • Heyyou Boy (12/23/2011 9:00:00 PM)

    From the heart, and i cant think of anything more poetic.

  • Bella Hernandez (12/23/2011 4:51:00 PM)

    although his english isnt good. doesnt mean that others wont understand his beautiful poems of love.
    both Deep Feeling, Love Speaks, has the most tremendous meaning of love!

Best Poem of Molay Toufik

Deep Feeling

Some mechanical changes that do not change the intent of the poem.
proposed and corrected by my dear friend C Cruz

So far away from you
Deep in love with you
If you're not my girl
I will try anything, I could
Everything; because, I should
If not, I will look the fool
Since no one lives without soul
That's why I'll call anytime by phone
Trying not to be alone

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