Molay Toufik


Molay Toufik Poems

1. Funny Wear, Steel Soldiers 1/11/2012
2. Love Speaks 12/16/2011
3. Deep Feeling 12/17/2011

Comments about Molay Toufik

  • Nicki Luvetti (1/23/2012 6:37:00 PM)

    I love that you try so hard with your english to deliver this truly incredible poem to the world. I agree with Jack Green... I don't know if anything more poetic exists that truly comes from the heart... If you wouldn't mind, I would love it if you could critique my poetry... -nicki

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  • Heyyou Boy (12/23/2011 9:00:00 PM)

    From the heart, and i cant think of anything more poetic.

  • Bella Hernandez (12/23/2011 4:51:00 PM)

    although his english isnt good. doesnt mean that others wont understand his beautiful poems of love.
    both Deep Feeling, Love Speaks, has the most tremendous meaning of love!
    ~Bella

Best Poem of Molay Toufik

Deep Feeling

Some mechanical changes that do not change the intent of the poem.
proposed and corrected by my dear friend C Cruz

So far away from you
Deep in love with you
If you're not my girl
I will try anything, I could
Everything; because, I should
If not, I will look the fool
Since no one lives without soul
That's why I'll call anytime by phone
Trying not to be alone

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