You....my single love
You.... my best of
I imagine you when i move
Cause without you i’m done
I breed you every day
I see you everywhere
When you cry, hard to show it
When you smile, impossible to head it
I need you more than any time
I feel you more than anyone
I enjoy your company
Cause believe me honey
With you i’m really funny
Like angel you never hurt Any
nice poem keep writing the more you write, the better you get you seem to have alot of feelings.. poetry is the best outlet ofcourse one question: do you write poetry in French as well?
Hi molay Your poem is sweet and real. I get the sense of it real well. The wording could be better. Pps comment on my poems.
if its your first piece of work..i must say its very good. you cn imagine th concept and th feel of th poem a lill better though...but nevertheless, its a good poem.. :)
This is a very emotional poem.It's very sweet but it could be better........but I really liked it!
I immensely enjoyed reading this poem. It's a very good write. The rhyming scheme added a certain flair to the poem. I will enjoy reading more.
Pretty good. It would definitely make your poem alot better if you studied English more. That would make it a lot easier to read and understand, and make it alot better overall. Hope you find it helpful.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Good poem if i say but you also need to improve on the choice of other words you use