Molay Toufik


Love Speaks - Poem by Molay Toufik

You....my single love
You.... my best of
I imagine you when i move
Cause without you i’m done
I breed you every day
I see you everywhere

When you cry, hard to show it
When you smile, impossible to head it
I need you more than any time
I feel you more than anyone

I enjoy your company
Cause believe me honey
With you i’m really funny
Like angel you never hurt Any


Comments about Love Speaks by Molay Toufik

  • Olayemi Ayo (2/4/2012 9:17:00 AM)


    Your love poem is good, keep it up. (Report) Reply

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  • Lee Mack (1/23/2012 3:44:00 PM)


    Evocative art in truth love and more work... (Report) Reply

  • Tiffany M... (12/28/2011 8:45:00 AM)


    I immensely enjoyed reading this poem. It's a very good write. The rhyming scheme added a certain flair to the poem. I will enjoy reading more. (Report) Reply

  • Joses Tirtabudi (12/28/2011 1:17:00 AM)


    Pretty good. It would definitely make your poem alot better if you studied English more. That would make it a lot easier to read and understand, and make it alot better overall. Hope you find it helpful. (Report) Reply

  • (12/27/2011 8:29:00 PM)


    nice rhyming, i enjoyed reading this (Report) Reply

  • (12/27/2011 6:59:00 PM)


    I enjoyed your poem, but to parts confused me, is it a error or am i just misunderstanding what you wrote?
    I breed you every day breed?
    When you smile, impossible to head it I Dont understand the 2nd part of this line.
    Other than tht luv it: D
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  • Vipins Puthooran (12/27/2011 2:23:00 PM)


    a sweet poem! ! I lke romantic poems like this one! ! Top marks! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (12/27/2011 2:11:00 PM)


    'tis a wonderful romantic poem, so sweet and emotional! ! ! Top marks! ! (Report) Reply

  • Richard Jarboe (12/27/2011 2:02:00 PM)


    great expression. feelings are hard to express so keep trying,
    ric
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  • Elizabeth Wesley (12/27/2011 1:59:00 PM)


    Hi Molay, in the 5th line did you meanneed you every day instead of breed.. I felt that it was an error. In the second verse you have show it in the first line and I think know it would give you a better ryhme in the second. Also, the very last word I think you mean any instead of eny. Otherwise it has a sweet emotional feel to it and something to say. Hope this has been of some help. Obviously you enjoy writing and if you read the old masters of poetry you will find their writing most helpful Good luck, you have lots of potential, hope I've been some help and you don't feel hurt. (Report) Reply

  • (12/27/2011 8:37:00 AM)


    This is a very emotional poem.It's very sweet but it could be better........but I really liked it! (Report) Reply

  • (12/26/2011 3:12:00 AM)


    if its your first piece of work..i must say its very good. you cn imagine th concept and th feel of th poem a lill better though...but nevertheless, its a good poem.. :) (Report) Reply

  • (12/25/2011 4:13:00 PM)


    Hi molay

    Your poem is sweet and real. I get the sense of it real well. The wording could be better.

    Pps comment on my poems.
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  • (12/25/2011 2:37:00 PM)


    nice poem
    keep writing
    the more you write, the better you get
    you seem to have alot of feelings.. poetry is the best outlet ofcourse
    one question: do you write poetry in French as well?
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  • Mugonda Prince (12/24/2011 10:53:00 PM)


    Good poem if i say but you also need to improve on the choice of other words you use (Report) Reply

  • (12/24/2011 2:11:00 PM)


    Love is the best thing in the world.
    Great write.
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  • (12/24/2011 10:21:00 AM)


    Sounds like you are truly head over heals. Nicely written. Keep penning (Report) Reply

  • (12/20/2011 12:42:00 PM)


    A true poet speaks & writes from th heart
    Poetry is abt feeling as u say it so clearly
    My heart cries out to th rude brckly
    Who considers himself as Shakespeare
    Clearly he'll nevr understand how this all goes
    I understood th poem and loved it
    Thanks for inviting me.
    Yes! 'Dnt quit yo day job'
    Poetry isn't about greed
    Even an infant could undrstand tht
    Its sad tht we have ppl like brckly
    In ths ocean f ours
    Good luck
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  • (12/19/2011 6:00:00 PM)


    AWWWZ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! what an abbsolute adorable love poem! ! ! !
    clearly states what i exactly feel for my BF! ! ! !
    wonderful poem! ! ! ! truely amzing and splendid! ! !
    <3 <3 <3
    absolutely incredible! ! ! brought a smile to me
    ty for the invite to read this fantastic poem! ! !
    ~Bella
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  • (12/19/2011 11:50:00 AM)


    Dear, Brackney
    I accept the most part of your judgement, and i'm not sad or i feel sorry for my self hell NO: D cause maybe I'm not writers like you say but certainly I'm not idiot you know why? cause I'm NOT & i will NEVER BE YOU, however don't think your self Clever & brilliant cause if you read my biography you will understand [if not be sure Bro you need shrink help] and by judging my English you forget that we are her to share our feeling, i can't consider my self good in English Cause truly i'm not and i will never tray to be also i'm not poet but my true feeling it's expose to my all friend and somehow you are welcome anyway hopefully i wish you correct your self and pout your angry far away from this holly website cause her is place for writers with open minded not for someone like you
    And Tanks for All the poets her for support and given me the courage by keeping my head up

    Brackney ==> Be In Peace With Your Self Man ;) & Enjoy xD
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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 16, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 27, 2011


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