委身 Poem by Anne Yun

委身

Rating: 5.0

风把书页翻完
听不清枝叶间的抑扬
萧萧呼过的声喘
爬走在她的脸上
二十岁的老妪
六十岁的青春
淌在眼里的风痕
一场情死的重生
委身给了此刻的情节

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christopher Tye 17 March 2017

Wonderful poem, commitment is always a lifelong quest.

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Luo Zhihai 16 March 2020

淌在眼里的风痕 一场情死的重生 委身给了此刻的情节 诗,让人浮想联翩!

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Luo Zhihai 16 March 2020

淌在眼里的风痕 一场情死的重生 委身给了此刻的情节 诗,让人浮想联翩!

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Liza Sudina 19 August 2017

Mystical and philosophical poem about hidden ages under the outer masks, which mabe seen through the pages and drops of rain whirling in eternity! 谢谢,美丽的诗!

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Daniel Brick 19 May 2017

What a beautiful language! Each component is a small work of art, of beautiful design. // Languages defeated my aspirations as a scholar. To receive a higher degree of Masters or PhD, you must master at least one foreign language. I failed at both French and German. despite my, mastery of their literatures in translation. An Asian language with its different alphabet and pronunciation - completely beyond me. That failure has kept me humble. I can't be puffed up with myself. And your mastery of English I consider a stunning achievement.

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Ernest Makuakua 20 April 2017

Powerful piece Anne A book though old its new everyday to the eye it catches whether it is new or old but if not read yet its new.

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