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[01] Reach

Rating: 5.0

Nothing happened beyond happening
But within that something changed
ahead of changing.

Neither a mug of coffee nor an event
Companion was the most precious gift
in the pleasant evening
I enjoyed at the highest order!

Bonsai was covered up

with the hum of small bells
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Excellent writing. Having begun from the first line, all the way to the end, bright depicting and excellent language are current. There is no elaborate unnecessary here the uses of metaphors. She isn't needed, because every word and the sentence very well are weighed by the Author. A pleasant evening appears to me, mug of the coffee, friend and even I can hear small bells. The grammar of the dream is deserving the acknowledgement. Very much I like such writing. (10v.) Greetings :) Maria Barbara Korynt

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