[03] And She Was Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq
[03] And She Was
Laughing demons were deep blue
Sky was frightened on the skyward
Scorching sunbeam marched on
The dusty yellow leafs were diffused
A sparrow was crying somewhere
Breezes were walking silently
Time was settled into the legs
Like the roots of a large tree
Nothing happened but a train left
And she was inside the train
Poem 03
Book 'Affluent Love- The Silent Killer' February 2012
Copyright Writer
Adarsha Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 978-984-8875-33-9
Such a large meaningful story in so few words, word work chiseled with skill++++++10 regards
such a elegant write... thoughts' provoking.... really a well crafted piece... 10+++
beautiful. it sounds so lonely, and i love the section about the breeze. well done. With respect, Abby
Nothing went off, a train left And she was into the train., , , , , ns lidw goes on with or without companion. it is real life... beautifull y said.....10
it was a wonderful poem.what ever happens life has to go on it does not stop well done keep it up.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/3/2024 9:33:52 PM # 1.0.0
Apparently, nothing happened.The nature waits solemnly the train departure Time stops to start again with the departure of the train..Two persons have been separated. Two people are breaking in their love.Nature is personified: .''A sparrow was crying somewhere/Breezes were walking silently.'' Epithets of color appear, very suggestive, that emphasizes the painting of the nature: ''dusty yellow leafs''.We expect the tear, but, no, it looks like rain. A beautiful poem.(and my little 10 is there)