ତୁମେ -01 (Tume -01 / Odia Poem) Poem by Kshirod Kumar Dehury

ତୁମେ -01 (Tume -01 / Odia Poem)

Rating: 5.0

ତୁମେ ଯେବେ ଆସିଗଲ

ମୋ ଜୀବନେ ଥରେ,

ସବୁ କିଛି ଭୂଲିଗଲି

ମୁଁ ଧୀରେ ଧୀରେ ।



ଜାଣିବାକୁ ଚାହିଁଲେ ବି

ଜାଣି ପାରୁନାହିଁ,

କହିବା କୁ ଚାହିଁଲେ ବି

କହି ପାରୁନାହିଁ ।।



ତୁମେ ଯେବେ କହିଦେଲ

ଏ ଜନ୍ମେ ମୁଁ ତୁମ,

ମୋ ଜୀବନେ ଫୁଟିଗଲା

ଫୁଲ ର ଏ ବନ ।



ହସେ ହସେ ଭରିଗଲା

ଏ ସଞ୍ଜ ସକାଳ,

ମୋ ଜୀବନେ ରହିଗଲା

ଏ ତ ଚିର କାଳ ।।

Thursday, November 30, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love and dreams,love and friendship,memoir
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 30 November 2017

sundar, tume jebe aasigala

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 30 November 2017

ହସେ ହସେ ଭରିଗଲା ଏ ସଞ୍ଜ ସକାଳ, ମୋ ଜୀବନେ ରହିଗଲା ଏ ତ ଚିର କାଳ ।। Lovely wording in such a melodically penned composition. Keep the spirit up, Kshirod. 10+++++ for this debut attempt.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 May 2018

ତୁମେ ଯେବେ କହିଦେଲ ଏ ଜନ୍ମେ ମୁଁ ତୁମ, ମୋ ଜୀବନେ ଫୁଟିଗଲା ଫୁଲ ର ଏ ବନ ।.....A lovely poem! (10)

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Do let me know when itbis translated in English so that I can review and comment.

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Soumyaranjan Mohanty 23 April 2018

The nice romantic poem my friend.I enjoy your poem very much.

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Premananda pradhan 08 January 2018

Add a comment.I love this your poem

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Rajendra Rout 30 November 2017

Great poem shaired.i enjoy your poem

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