(029) Cactuses Poem by premji premji

(029) Cactuses

Rating: 2.7


Dear,
You remember
those cactuses:
stand still always,
grown in a flower pot
in my home garden
and our names
scrolled with a splinter
on a lone stem!

Now,
whenever my eyes
fall on them,
remember a lone lily
among the thorns!


22.05.98

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pandian Angelina 29 May 2009

If you find a dew drop On your Cactus, Prem Know it is nothing, but, A tear dropp from my heart. Most touching, romatic feeling Your 'Lily' finds a place In every heart which feels And every Soul that loves! Wonderful poem, Angel

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Sandra Fowler 25 April 2009

Superb imagery in this richly metaphorical offering. You are a poet of many moods. Warm regards, Sandra

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Mamta Agarwal 06 June 2008

i really liked this poem.lone lily among the thorns- very symbolic. mamta

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