Dear,
You remember
those cactuses:
stand still always,
grown in a flower pot
in my home garden
and our names
scrolled with a splinter
on a lone stem!
Now,
whenever my eyes
fall on them,
remember a lone lily
among the thorns!
22.05.98
Superb imagery in this richly metaphorical offering. You are a poet of many moods. Warm regards, Sandra
i really liked this poem.lone lily among the thorns- very symbolic. mamta
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
If you find a dew drop On your Cactus, Prem Know it is nothing, but, A tear dropp from my heart. Most touching, romatic feeling Your 'Lily' finds a place In every heart which feels And every Soul that loves! Wonderful poem, Angel