When I went to
His dwellig place,
He asked:
Why did you come
In search of me,
When I live within you?
When I was about to
Light a candle,
He told: be a candle instead!
When I went to my love:
She told: be my breath dear!
When I went to my little sister,
She told: be my hope for life!
When I went to the world,
They told:
You are Nobody
When I went to the world, They told: You are Nobody.......................excellent work pal..... Fahim
A nice poem. Yes the last lines are marvllous.10 for it.
The world is a fickle lover, Do not worry - When The universal lover God And the encircling hearts Of near and dear loving be What right has the world To label or call anyone A 'Nobody' - When It has done, nothing to us?
Very poignant and beautiful. Keep on shining Premji. You are a candle.10, of course. Warm regards, Sandra
well, we have different facets in life...multigenre actors on dfferent scenes of a single life drama...the world, as a whole, doesn't care much about an individual...good poem...unusual concept well handled...congrats...10
Very well said... Truthful and insightful... An impressive write indeed... Thanks for sharing...10 +++
Premji, i am really impressed- this is amazing- who cares what the world thinks as long as you are loved by your dear ones and Him. who am i, not a nobody. you are the universe, and the universe is within you.10 no beating about the bush, your style is penetrating and incisive. Mamta
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
What counts most is that you knew yourself better than other... what you are and where you stand! A 10.