03/07/2008 Would You Poem by Coreena Dejesus

03/07/2008 Would You

Rating: 5.0


I find myself dreaming about you,
Would you be my one and only boo?
Would you actually stand by my side,
Love me even after I have cried?
Take my imperfections with a grain of salt,
Love me for my every fault?
Would you be there when times were bad,
Through the fights and when I got mad?
Would you cuddle with me all night long,
Would you be there for me when I'm not strong?
Would you be honest with me till the end,
Would you be more than just a causal friend?
Take me out and treasure our time,
Would you worry about every spent dime.
Would you not hurt me and make me cry,
Would you answer my questions with a reply?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kash Earley 22 March 2008

to the point. excellent. just a thought. they all would...in the beginning. Like yo stuff.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 09 March 2008

nice love poem, well done, thanks for sharing

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Rommel Filoteo 09 March 2008

It's so deeply in your own expressive way that you helped us understand what is the true meaning of a person in love, and come into my our person once more. Lovely piece! -Rommel

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Coreena Dejesus

Coreena Dejesus

USA (Born in MA) (Raised in MI)
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