03/08/2008 Depressing Moment Poem by Coreena Dejesus

03/08/2008 Depressing Moment

Rating: 5.0


I feel my heart harding bitter and cold,
The things that happen in my life are getting old.
I'm becoming very numb and hating things,
Just the little obstacles that life brings.
So many things and yet another scandal,
How many can I expect to have to handle?
Why can't my life go more at ease,
I get happy for a moment but it's just a tease.
All my life I feel like I constantly get fails,
What happened to the childhood cute fairy tails?
Live happily ever after with a white picket fence,
Instead I live in a constant life defense.
My past these things I wish I could erase,
I just want to be happy and have a smile on my face.
I try to reach out to the Lord read my bible and pray,
Wake up tomorrow and hope it's a better day.

March 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 17 March 2008

life is a rave up by hours and days years when move yet by gales and pains as the two sides of a coin when twined as when blessed by the divine bliss.............beautiful peace, i like it, well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing

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Desiree Whitamore 12 March 2008

oh this is sad...thanks for sharing.

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Con Nie 08 March 2008

I think we all have days like that. I like how you end the poem with the prayer and hope. That is what keeps lots of us going. Another ten. Sincerely, Connie Webb

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Coreena Dejesus

Coreena Dejesus

USA (Born in MA) (Raised in MI)
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