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(058) April Notes - Poem by premji premji

O April!
You are the cruelest of
all months!

You know April,
love is a silent killer!
Comes like a sniper,
fires cannonballs into
silent hearts!
Changes them like
erupt volcanoes!
every mind,
every moment cancerous
which multiply in
unknown progressions,
chain reactions
and I am sinking like Titanic!

O April!
Please don't torment me
with your flowers yellow,
stop your big bangs!
Kiss my soul
with your warm lips
and let it be one among
your everlasting flowers!


Comments about (058) April Notes by premji premji

  • (3/7/2009 12:11:00 AM)

    the intensity of feeling, pain well expressed through metaphors and images, passionate out pouring of a sensitive heart 10

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  • (7/27/2008 5:37:00 AM)

    You have a unique poetic voice and you use it well. Ten for this.

    Warm regards,

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  • (7/21/2008 12:05:00 AM)

    nice! i really like this a lot (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 20, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 17, 2009

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