(1) Lunar Madness Poem by leonard daranjo

(1) Lunar Madness

Rating: 4.9


I remember the sea
In the full moon
All foamy and frothy and free
I remember her face
In the full moon
Wreathed in a heavenly glow
I remember life
In the full moon
Un-harnessed and rearing to go
I remember the kids
In the full moon
They frolicked and danced and sang
I remember the wind
In the full moon
Invigorating, wild and cool
I remember my friends
In the full moon
Generous, kind and magnanimous
I remember the mountains
In the full moon
Serene, strong and stately
I remember the cats
In the full moon
They were part of the tapestry
I remember the trees
In the full moon
They swayed to a rhythmic chant
I remember the earth
In the full moon
A veritable paradise

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ada Shelley 10 September 2007

A lovely contemporary poem. Well done!

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Sandra Fowler 10 January 2008

Love and remembrance sings in this poem like the sea itself. Very exceptional. Leonard.One of your very best best efforts to date. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Alison Cassidy 13 January 2008

The full moon is a perfect setting for this nostalgic homage to life. The repetition serves to enhance each image that flows effortlessly and musically from your pen. Your moon shines with pearly incandescence. Beautiful poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Yelena M. 03 July 2009

You have surrounded your readers by eternal moonlight with your poem.Thank you for sharing. A.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 October 2008

The nature of the lunar madness is well expressed in the full moon. Lovely poem. My 10 is added to it with love.

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Kay Vitter 06 September 2008

The moon has your soul in its ambient clutches, and you have surrendered!

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Matt Johnston 25 April 2008

This poem dose not suffer form a few embraced clichés, the writing is just that good.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 30 March 2008

this is a damper In the full moon They were part of the tapestry the best is the part about the trees ina rhythmnic chant. keep it up leonard.

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