(1) Ode To Immortality Poem by leonard daranjo

(1) Ode To Immortality

Rating: 3.1


Jetting creative fire
Through a diamond eye
Sculpting hair-like ripples
On an emerald sky

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 06 June 2009

A sparkling rhyming couplet that captures the universal creative spirit in four magical lines. A precious jewel of a poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Riquetta Elliott 14 April 2008

A lovely image Mr. Daranjo very nice.

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Jerry Hughes 21 November 2007

Delightful imagery Leonard, thank you...

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Sandra Fowler 14 October 2007

Your couplets are perfectly in tune. You have a way with words. Warm regards, Sandra

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immortalised for ever..sheer serendipity

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