10's In Buckets Poem by Richard Wlodarski

10's In Buckets

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Well-meaning '10'
Forever when
I write good yarn
But golly gee darn

It's Not Registering!

I write about love
And the sky above
About Purple Rain
And the brilliant brain

But The '10's' Not Registering!

I write about President Trump
And kicking him in his big rump
I've made a video
About Justin Trudeau

But The 10's Not Registering!

Maybe rating meter's a bust
Or the '10's ain't a just must
Maybe my Poem Of The Day to-be
Will evacuate my soul's misery

But The 10's Not Registering!

Maybe the stubborn rating meter
Will recover when hell freezes over
Maybe Poem Hunter will get new technology
To put all of us out of our misery

Yeah The 10's Coming Alive
Right Back To Its Funky Jive

Wednesday, January 11, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: humor,humorous,memory,mind,poems,poet,poetess,poetic expression,rating,teasing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sister Frances 11 January 2017

Brilliant poem, and yes I didn't think a functioning input field could give me so much joy and so much sorrow, but now I have the power once again to Reply and make comments...so yes I feel your poem :)

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Richard Wlodarski 11 January 2017

Thank you, Sister Frances. It's a joy to behold.

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