Edward Kofi Louis

Gold Star - 308,341 Points (13th October 1961 / Accra, GHANA)

10 Weeks Ago! - Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

Today is 10 weeks agao and,
I am still waiting for her call;
For, she left me without a note!
It is just like when a boy loves a girl,
In the land of beautiful roses.

10 weeks ago,
And, i am still waiting for her letter;
And, it is just like when a girl loves a boy!
In the land of beautiful roses,
With true love, mercy and concern.

10 weeks agao!
Like the muse of the king and the prince
Living in the garden of love;
But, nature had now left me alone in the bush,
With the sun shining on me alone.

With the muse of an echo heard from afar!
But, she left me without a note;
The rain will surely fall one day! !
To quench my thirst in the forest.

Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness

Comments about 10 Weeks Ago! by Edward Kofi Louis

  • Anne Velevski (3/3/2017 5:43:00 AM)

    I like how you started...keep up the momentum though...very good I like it very much. (Report) Reply

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  • Rebecca Navarre (11/14/2016 8:19:00 PM)

    Oh, So Heart Touching! ! ! Beautifully Written! ! !
    You're A Very Talented Writer! ! ! Thank You Very
    Much For Sharing! ! ! 10s! ! !
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 8, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 8, 2014

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