Wednesday, June 24, 2009

(147) Song Song Go Away! Comments

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A stupid song plays inside my head
When I try to write a poem
It pushes back all the thoughts and lines
It clutters up my mind with foam
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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)
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Pandian Angelina 11 July 2009

Yeah! we all go thro' the line running in our mind syndrome, irritating like a flea buzzing, you have expressed so well the feeling, in simple but strong words, the passion with which you write is really so nice and the personal touch of bringing your sister into the picture you paint - Good! I like your innocent and open approach in your poems, be a child for some more years Risha and help us remember the child in us! Angel

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Sandhya S N 08 July 2009

Risha kutty.... Fine write You expressed in very brilliant words which many had felt before... regards sandhya

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Mamta Agarwal 24 June 2009

i have felt like this many times, a song, la few lines keep on running in the mind without permission like a stuck record. well expressed Risha 10 Mamta

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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