172.A Bridge Too Far Poem by rajagopal haran

172.A Bridge Too Far

Rating: 4.8


Tender music trumpeting thunder
Needle rain declaring devastation
Stationary souls enacting cosmic binding
Berated lover pines for the love

Agonizing perfume stimulating the mind
Soundless anklets undermining the nerves
Oscillating garment hunting for space
Unearthly lady fair, endeavors a crack

Distraught hands enslaving the locks
Enamored body tuning up the trend
Firefighting lips palpitating all over
Everlasting night enlists another encounter


31.05.2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vidyadhar Durgekar 10 June 2008

An excellent composition with most poetic elements Good rhythm vision and imagery.....my 10

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Raveendran . 05 June 2008

Beautiful enigma rains splendor.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 03 June 2008

A writer's imagination flying too far that brought a words-bridge too far. Well done Rh!

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rajagopal haran

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Tiruchirapalli-Tamilnadu-India
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