rajagopal haran

Revisiting The Theory Of Evolution Of Species

(The scientific world is coming up with theories with strong points to disprove Darwin’s Beautiful theory; I have also done my Research based on my observations; Ask for the forgiveness of Darwin!)

Inheritance in organisms occurs through discrete traits!

Strolling on the street during the wee hours
Saw a girl in skimpy dress
Was she a Descent with modifications?
Opened the scriptures to note the dress codes!
Adam and Eve had no dress:
Leave alone code and bode
Forbidden apple creating the bias
Longer leaves formed the dress
Evolved into lengthy robes
Fashion parading by kings and queens
Increasing the pain of enslaved lots!
Robes turning into saris and pants!
Saris turning into mini gowns and frocks
Full pants only remained ever full!
In the biting cold sleeveless top
Betraying the skin to bones and nerves
Mini skirt proving a competition
Girl was strolling hand in hand
Another hand baring only fingers
Pants also touching the ground and dust
Pounding heart compelled to look up the face
A male was the figure shivering in cold
Referred to Darwin for postulates to help
Beneficial mutations specifically preserved!
Aiding the survival in the process Natural selection
Disadvantaged dying out referring to the male!
Is Selective mutation only in girls?
Got Darwin right as directional selection!
For males it forms disruptive selection!
Shivers of chill going through the spine
Shuddered at the thought of weeding out of males!

Seeing the blue films and exhibiting the same
Punishable anywhere a hundred years back
The previous blue viewed in Eastman color
Are available in a variety of technical colors!

Touching the girls was a criminal offence
Intimate scenes now compulsory in films!
With kissing as bonus and stripping as incentive
Unlucky Darwin born a bit earlier
Here is the proof of stabilizing selection!

Scanning the old theory of co-evolution
Analyzed facts to substantiate Darwin
Ho! This time Darwin was lucky
Serial killing! The forte of males
Killing as maniacs and killing after sex!
Lo! here come women shouldering the burden
Killing fellow women in no lesser measure!
Science being a tube light asking for more
Got a glance of a lady puffing out smoke!
Insatiable science driving me for more
Perchance glanced girls in a pub at midnight
Devouring the drums brimming up with wine!

Co-operation another postulate
My study becoming tougher and tougher
Desperately looking around
Stopped hearing a hell of a noise!
Oh! A car dashed against the pavement dwellers
Mowing down the sleeping dogs!
Curious to go near the car
Got the glimpse of a lady at the wheel
With smell of ethanol dozing off the nose
A lively proof for co-operation!

When heritable differences become more common
Evolution occurs for survival!
Adaptations only will make me live
Or extinction is the word written on the wall!

18.01.2008

Poem Submitted: Friday, January 18, 2008

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  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (2/15/2008 9:30:00 AM)

    Certainly interesting one-, and the postulates of Darwiin`s theory still hold good in all ages and eons as his enire studies cover from robesless Adam and Eves to today`s halfy manoeuvered mini -max hypothesis and he took all possible and plausible factors into consideration even by applying the theory of permutations and combinations and lastly perhaps he deciphered the code for variability of modifications with little bit smiles and might have concluded the theory --descend.->>>>>>descent ->-> with modification <-<-<-dear friend 10+ certainly, thanks for sharing

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  • Rishi Shukla (1/29/2008 3:44:00 AM)

    The journey of evolution taking a different perspective.
    Well written!

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  • Anjali Mandokhot (1/26/2008 10:57:00 PM)

    interesting piece....the way u ave drawn the relation betwen the two contexts is laudable....sorry couldn't read it earlier..bt kep sharing....u ave the craft
    wishes
    anjali

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  • okeydokey #3 (1/26/2008 2:16:00 AM)

    i...really like...the way you think...you the bomb...man...

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  • Jeanette KrantzJeanette Krantz (1/24/2008 5:00:00 PM)

    def need to reread that one! !

    very thought inducing....clothes never made me think so much
    it was a good idea to put down in words

    nice job

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  • Vikram Aarella - The Poem Shooter (1/22/2008 12:29:00 PM)

    Really Interseting read Mr Haran, well done

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  • John Nightingale (1/22/2008 10:40:00 AM)

    This is interesting. But we are talking genetic evolution, so an individual would not be able to make the choice to adapt to save themselves. By adapting they could only cause successive generations to survive and flourish. If you use this as a metaphor for changing the nature of humans to prevent destruction of life and the environment. We can bring peace and environmental balance for future generations by changing our ways now. We would need to accept however that we would not benefit from those changes. That's if you believe in the theory.

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  • Seema Aarella (1/22/2008 6:15:00 AM)

    very interesting...thought provoking! There is certain traits among animals like aping, mimicking, camoufalge....where the situations and surroundings urge them to behave differently! to find a mate, or cheat their prey...or to save them selves....i think these people are aping westren culture...or there could be other plans.i think today even homo sapiens can be catergorised depending on their behaviour and thinking capability! Because intellectuals like us are not falling for this trend! ! !

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  • Indira Babbellapati (1/21/2008 12:48:00 AM)

    lot of observation and analytical thinking...!

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  • aYa Y. (1/20/2008 6:43:00 AM)

    mm.. how come mostly about woman comments?

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  • Lucianne Fasolo (1/19/2008 9:16:00 AM)

    Hmm, this is interesting.: P I'm still processing the evolution bits, I can't comment on them right now; but good job! : D

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  • Rommel Filoteo (1/19/2008 6:22:00 AM)

    Wonderful penning. You wrote this letter for us to keep, a wonderful reminder of what you feel in our world! God bless our world always!

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  • quercus : I've never got paid for my hits... (1/19/2008 12:10:00 AM)

    It seems that the world spins in more then three dimensions. We try to catch up with its speed and the ever changing parameters...Only the strongest will finish their run :)
    This is excellent. Thank you for sharing.

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  • Rajaram RamachandranRajaram Ramachandran (1/18/2008 9:42:00 PM)

    The poem sounds like a front page newspaper with all the spicy news. Darwin's theory of 'the natural evolution and the fittest will survive' is now being questioned in the modern world. The poem is full of satire, which I enjoyed from the first word to the last one. A good attempt indeed!

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  • Sandra Fowler (1/18/2008 8:45:00 PM)

    Very well expressed.Praise for your rich vocabulary. Take care.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra

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  • Emancipation Planz (1/18/2008 4:19:00 PM)

    10 from me.. it was so busy I was feared being culled out at the bottleneck and seriously wondered if mutative selection was transforming some zygotic chromosomes disfunction

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  • Rani Turton (1/18/2008 1:41:00 PM)

    Written really well, with a remarkable sense of observation! Enjoyed the poem thoroughly. Bravo and keep posting.

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  • Raman Savithiri (1/18/2008 12:18:00 PM)

    First I smiled at your jovial writing; but somewhere in the heart it pricks too - the truth the mothers’ group going away from its motherly way - let ur pen kill this mad fashion and blind evolution!

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  • Raveendran . (1/18/2008 11:15:00 AM)

    Interesting story, nice rendition

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