(2) Soulless Places Poem by Luis Gil de la Puente

(2) Soulless Places

Rating: 2.9


We take the paths
of lesser resistance,
where there is no danger,
where hope is a bargain.

If we become
what we don´t like
we don´t see it
any more.

We want to be accepted.

There are some
soulless places
we can´t escape,
without risk,
without effort.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duh Huh 26 April 2009

Beautifully written. I must be one of the different ones as i usually take the path that seems the most interesting, after considering all and accepting consequences :) Muy bien echo amigo Luis, como siempre sus poemas tocan el alma con su realismo. Saludos y abrazos.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 18 October 2008

Eloquent....thought provoking...fine indeed......10+

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