Athul KrishnaA

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20 A Wonderful Dream - Poem by Athul KrishnaA

I was dreaming that
A Lady was screaming
As if surrounded bugs
But really was surrounded by thugs
I was Spider man
They took her awy on a van
I got in front of the van quickly
The thugs fought angrily
The van drove away splashing water on me
I suddenly opened my eyes to see
It was 8 in the morn!

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  • (4/22/2008 10:50:00 PM)

    and you let that lady go with the thugs? in case your mother springled water on you, tonight you wear a water proof jacket and go dreaming. fight back the thugs! ... and never sleep till eight!
    for your age you are very talented. keep dreaming... keep writing.... all the best
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  • (4/22/2008 9:01:00 AM)

    Lacks depth and vision but u have plenty of time ahead of u to nurture ur potential the supposed surprising ending is a bit of a cliche in some silent movies. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 12, 2008

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