ମିଳନ ର ରଙ୍ଗ- 20 (Milana Ra Ranga -020/Odia Poem) Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

ମିଳନ ର ରଙ୍ଗ- 20 (Milana Ra Ranga -020/Odia Poem)

Rating: 5.0

ତୁମ ଓଠ ଯେତେ ଯେତେ ଥର-

ଛୁଉଁ ଥିଲା ଗାଲ, ଓଠ, ଆଖି,

ଛାତି, ବେକ ମୂଳେ।



କିଏ ଅବା ଢାଳି ଚାଲିଥିଲା

କାମନା ର ନୀଳ ଘିଅ, ମୋର

ବାସନା ବେଦୀ ରେ ।।

ମିଳନ ର ରଙ୍ଗ- 20 (Milana Ra Ranga -020/Odia Poem)
Sunday, November 5, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: longing,love,love and art,love and dreams,love and friendship,love and life,meeting,desire
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A meeting with the soul mate, even if in a dream, adds colours to the life.
Before the limbs or lips or hands feel each other, the soul and the heart starts reading each other, feeling each other, getting into one form of existence. One lives for the other, dedicates all the desires just to keep the counterpart happy and eternally alive.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prativa Rani 08 November 2017

କିଏ ଅବା ଢାଳି ଚାଲିଥିଲା କାମନା ର ନୀଳ ଘିଅ, ମୋର ବାସନା ବେଦୀ ରେ ।। 10+++ for the nice poem.

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Sonali Parida 08 November 2017

କିଏ ଅବା ଢାଳି ଚାଲିଥିଲା କାମନା ର ନୀଳ ଘିଅ, ମୋର ବାସନା ବେଦୀ ରେ ।। A real, nicely penned poem with intensity of love expressed.I agree with you.

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Sakalabaktula Sairaj 07 November 2017

so romantic poem mam your a great... bahut sundar

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Sonali Parida 08 November 2017

କିଏ ଅବା ଢାଳି ଚାଲିଥିଲା କାମନା ର ନୀଳ ଘିଅ, ମୋର ବାସନା ବେଦୀ ରେ ।। A real, nicely penned poem with intensity of love expressed.I agree with you Sairaj.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 07 November 2017

Thanks dear poet for the nice remarks and these inspiring words.

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 05 November 2017

ତୁମ ଓଠ ଯେତେ ଯେତେ ଥର- ଛୁଉଁ ଥିଲା ଗାଲ, ଓଠ, ଆଖି, ଛାତି, ବେକ ମୂଳେ। କିଏ ଅବା ଢାଳି ଚାଲିଥିଲା କାମନା ର ନୀଳ ଘିଅ, ମୋର ବାସନା ବେଦୀ ରେ ।। Nicely penned

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Sonali Parida 08 November 2017

କିଏ ଅବା ଢାଳି ଚାଲିଥିଲା କାମନା ର ନୀଳ ଘିଅ, ମୋର ବାସନା ବେଦୀ ରେ ।। A real, nicely penned poem with intensity of love expressed.I agree with you Dear Soumya.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 07 November 2017

Thanks Soumya for the nice remarks.

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Alina Kaikeyi 05 November 2017

Before the limbs or lips or hands feel each other, the soul and the heart starts reading each other, feeling each other, getting into one form of existence. Lovely sharing. 10+++

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Sonali Parida 08 November 2017

କିଏ ଅବା ଢାଳି ଚାଲିଥିଲା କାମନା ର ନୀଳ ଘିଅ, ମୋର ବାସନା ବେଦୀ ରେ ।। A real, nicely penned poem with intensity of love expressed.I agree with you dear Alina.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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