20 Things I Hate About You... Poem by Brianna Townsend

20 Things I Hate About You...

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1. I hate the way you make me feel guilty about everything I do,
2. I hate the way you can go forever without even seeing or talking to me, but expect me to talk to you.
3. I hate how you're so happy and I'm so sad,
4. I hate how you treated me like s*** but yet I'm the one feeling bad.
5. I hate how I feel so weak and you're so strong,
6. I hate how you think you do no wrong.
7. I hate how you pretend that everythings okay,
8. I hate how you took my innocence away.
9. I hate how I feel so scared,
10. I hate how I actually believed you cared.
11. I hate the way you looked me in the eyes,
12. I hate how everything was nothing but lies.
13. I hate the way I feel inside,
14. I hate the nights I spent alone and cried.
15. I hate how everything seems wrong,
16. I hate the feeling of wanting to belong.
17. I hate how you're always in my head,
18. I hate everything you have ever said.
19. I hate wondering how you really feel about me,
20. But most of all, I hate how you can't just let me be.

Thursday, April 2, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: hate,innocence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scott Daniels 02 April 2009

wow thats really clever. Thats the most ingenious method i've seen used to get your point across

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Katerina Yanchuk 09 April 2009

It really feels like was created on your own experience I guess it is the best way to expess feelings and to make the work of poetry art

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Silent Speaker 07 April 2009

I love how you describe everything so well. it such a personal poem with such anger and saddness. good job :)

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rago rago 07 April 2009

nice piece......... well penned......with regards lago

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Barry A. Lanier 06 April 2009

Sounding a little like my 'Men Are Masochists' for they surely tend to dispay that trait.....

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Crushanda Williams 03 April 2009

i like this poem alot

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