2018: Doesn't Last Forever Poem by Quincy Moses

2018: Doesn't Last Forever

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We started the year together
Our stars aligned thinking we could be forever
Those were just words we said to eachother
So we wouldn't leave one another

But as we grew old
Our love became a story told
A love worth more than gold
Died and became cold

Quincy Moses
Friday, December 14, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
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Bri Edwards 01 September 2019

last line sounds like a loving couple both died and became cold, as i guess dead bodies are apt to do. could this possibly be what the line means? ? ? ? or did the " love" die and turn cold? bri :)

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Quincy Moses 10 December 2019

Thank you Bri for reading, the love did die and turned cold

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 December 2018

Chukwuebuka, such a well expressed poem...10+++

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Quincy Moses 15 December 2018

Thank you very much

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