240. Ghost Ships Of The Deep Comments

Profanisaurus, no title yet? ? ? :) bri

more title suggestions, Profanisaurus, No More Shore Leave Now They'll Have To S-W-I-M The Plank! Business As Usual, But Wetter 420 i came here to tell you Kim Barney's idea for a ttlte, but i see he has left it below already. bri :) have a craze as day! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Great poem. For a title, how about 'Phantoms of the Deep'?

The sea is a harsh mistress, and has taken so many over the many centuries, from warrors to sailors to fishers to travelers. Your poem expresses this loss so elgantly and with beautiful sadness. As for a title, I usually have a hard time with my own titles, but here are a couple thoughts. No Way Home Forever Sailing

Sailors Of The Deep............?

fabulous! this is going to MyPoemList as well as (at your offering) into the August showcase on my PH site. great flow, storytelling, and idea. i almost believe it! bri :) among others, my favorite lines: no trace of fear can be found on their faces no sign of how they met their fate

a suggestion, you mean? mm.. what about ''The faint ghosts of the abyss''?