26 - I Look But Can'T Touch Poem by nicola burkett

26 - I Look But Can'T Touch

Rating: 5.0


I watch the birds over head as they cut through the sky
Envious of their freedom as they elegantly fly
Wishing that it were I that was leaving this place
To search of love and passion for my soul to grace

I watch the ripples of tears that flow into the see
The rush of emotions I feel, that seem to be escaping me
My heart choked by pain of a love that I seem to yearn
Across the bridge he waits for me, the bridge that will forever burn

His body I can almost touch, my fingertips miles away
So many words of love to him that I long to say
Can he even see me does he know that I exist
My attraction towards the man that I can not resist

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Dorn 23 December 2006

Nicola, I like the concept of the burning bridge... the perfect choice of imagery and meaning. Well done! ! Brian

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Anna Russell 04 December 2006

Not notice you? He's clearly not right in the head - forget him! 10 from me. Hugs Anna xxx

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Sandra Fowler 26 November 2006

Powerful, genuine and very original. Write on, Nicola. Warm regards, Sandra

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Ian Curtis 22 November 2006

Again a brilliant piece of writting All the best Ian

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nicola burkett

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South East, London
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