3 Liner: Try To Be Faster Poem by Pallab Chaudhury

3 Liner: Try To Be Faster

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O snail!
Try to be faster- to cross
this lonely state road!

Dated: 22nd August 2024.






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Thursday, August 22, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: august,lonely
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Mair 23 August 2024

It accords dignity to the snail by addressing it as a fellow creature. Perhaps it even identified with that creature.

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Denis Mair 23 August 2024

There's something great about the voice that utters this verse. It thinks and feels for that tiny creature. tt

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Denis Mair 23 August 2024

Excellent. When observation pares a situation down to a brush with mortality, its poignancy resonates with the universal predicament of existence.

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Pallab Chaudhury 26 August 2024

Thank you so much for the beautiful remarks on the poem. With best wishes....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 August 2024

A meaningful short write. Well crafted.

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Pallab Chaudhury 26 August 2024

Thank you mam for the beautiful comment being shared....

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