O snail!
Try to be faster- to cross
this lonely state road!
Dated: 22nd August 2024.
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There's something great about the voice that utters this verse. It thinks and feels for that tiny creature. tt
Excellent. When observation pares a situation down to a brush with mortality, its poignancy resonates with the universal predicament of existence.
Thank you so much for the beautiful remarks on the poem. With best wishes....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
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It accords dignity to the snail by addressing it as a fellow creature. Perhaps it even identified with that creature.