Some words crystallise into a poem…
In idle hours of a day-
The body searches for a shadow-mat!
When the overhead sun pierces down
Through the gaps of green leaves
And percolates into ear-drum
The mind rushes like an eagle
Leaving the surcharge junks;
It surprises the silent noon…
So, I think-
Some words sound too in dream…
Date: 27-08-2017.
Through the gaps of green leaves. he mind rushes like an eagle... surprising the silent noon...... b eautiful expressions., very poetic.. thank you dear poet for this poem. tony
"Some words crystallise into a poem…" I really like that first line! !
Words in dream like a dance of the angels, so well conceived and portrayed. Thank you dear Pallab......10 + To my favourite
5 Stars full on-TOP, I like very much the powerful metaphors
could you please help me understand the meaning of the poem. It's too complex for me I think.
I am one with your concluding line, since I have experienced that from nearest by: my dear one is just like this, Words sound in a dream, so true and the heat here is so imaginable. Magnificent metaphored poem
Thank you so much dear madam for the beautiful comments on the poem... Stay safe
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
so I think- Some words sound too in dream........- cleves writing! A beautiful poem!
Nice to see the positive comment from you. Stay blessed... PC