3 Mice On The Tin Roof Poem by Pradip Chattopadhyay

3 Mice On The Tin Roof

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3 mice on the tin roof
though their minds were on food
an impulsive id drove them
they swung to different mood!

I warned myself here no poetry
no story to make out of it
let them have in privacy
a good time bitterly sweet!

3 mice on the tin roof
swayed by their id
I should have stayed aloof
and not watched them in greed!

I told me there’s no poem
in the 3 mice and their id
leave them alone with their game
but my greed paid it no heed!

It’s not civil not nice
to act a peeping Tom
see furtively the 3 mice
breaching all courteous norms!

3 mice on the tin roof
to me I had this to say
go your way stay aloof
and not venture on their way!

Wednesday, November 6, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: greed
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 09 September 2014

Cute and lovely mice on the tin roof looking for the food so beautifully composed......Pradipji.......I loved it

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Adeline Foster 17 January 2014

Ah, Three Blind Mice to be sure. So cute and fun. Read mine - Brier Fever - Adeline

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