314. What Does Not Kill Me Will Only Disappoint Me Poem by Jaden Knight

314. What Does Not Kill Me Will Only Disappoint Me



What does not kill me will only disappoint me
what only weakens me must burn and die
though my wings are bruised and broken
still you will not stop me if I spread them to fly

What will not love must truly hate me
will except no middle ground
while I've gone and lost the part that's you
so much more there is to be found

What won't freeze must be pure cold hearted
what won't melt will surely burn
if you cannot be one to teach and lead
then you must follow and of your place learn

What does not kill me will only disappoint me
what only weakens me must burn and die
though my wings were bruised and broken
I was still able to spread them wide and fly

Sunday, May 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: hate
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 13 May 2016

i like how you almost duplicated stanza one at the end. i'll get this into May's showcase soon, but i've almost run out of time on library's computer today. our computer is 'down'. : ( thanks, bri :)

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