358. Cupid's New Rifle Poem by Jaden Knight
358. Cupid's New Rifle
This is a friendly advance warning
for everyone next valentine's day
Cupid isn't using a bow no more
he's bored of people ducking out of the way
He's gone and bought a love sniper rifle
with the best long range scope
you won't see it coming until you're hit
and then you haven't a hope
It comes with a 30 round magazine
loaded with supersonic darts
he could be round the corner
taking careful aim at your heart
So acquire the best body armour
to shield and protect your chest
don't say I didn't warn you
or that I didn't even try my best
to April's showcase of poems from the British Isles. Thanks, Jarden et al. bri " ;)
thanks, Aries P. aka John Westlake, for starting the October 2016 showcase off right! i love this poem and have done what i can do to put it into Section A this month. now i'm just waiting for PH to do its magic and actually have your poem show up there! [well, this site IS free! ! ! ] i love your cleverness and the rhyming here. great writing, for me at least. ha ha to MyPoemList bri :) - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - p.s. Cupid isn't using a bow no more..............i like the use of no more instead of any more here, BUT my English teachers might have had fits if i'd used no more in this way when i was in school. some people, i'm sure, DO talk like this. :) you won't see it coming until you're hit and then you haven't a hope.................Ah! how love can sneak up on a person at times! ! ! i'm hiding! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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oops! JADEN. ;)))))))))))))))