#382 Haiku Dancing Sunset Poem by Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

#382 Haiku Dancing Sunset



Your smile lit the night
Sunset danced on river's waves
Both captured my heart

Nov.3,2008

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C T Heart 06 November 2008

Haikus are great to those who have a taste, the imagery used in this piece was well crafted in a very creative manner... For me haiku is more challenging to write than any other free verse composition... a 10 great job..

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