jan oskar hansen

4 Seasonal Haiku

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Snows only purpose?
To make my garden look good
Four months a year


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Shadows and light
In an unseemly embrace
Foolish April Dance


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In the middy heat
Mules seeks shady carob trees
Man seeks the beach.

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Morning sadness
Rain trickles down the window
Grey October sky.

Poem Submitted: Friday, April 18, 2008

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  • La La (11/8/2014 5:45:00 PM)

    Beautiful descriptions, well thought out, a great haiku.

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  • * Sunprincess * (7/9/2014 9:21:00 AM)

    .......~ rain trickles down the window ~ is very good imagery.....enjoyed every stanza....

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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (9/12/2008 5:11:00 PM)

    Enjoyed the hikus of seasons. Nice composition.

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  • Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (9/9/2008 3:46:00 PM)

    Very lovely.Good points about seasons

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  • Ben Gieske (6/24/2008 7:57:00 AM)

    I enjoyed these 4 haiku with their strong images.

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  • Ian Williams (5/8/2008 7:25:00 AM)

    Just because you make a word plural doesnt mean it has two syllables... faget.

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