412. Will You Be My Ship's Captain Poem by Jaden Knight

412. Will You Be My Ship's Captain



Will you be my ship's captain
someone needs to take command
the first mate is a decent sort
but cannot give the right orders

Will you help be my navigator
and plot the right course for the vessel
the helmsman is good enough at his job
but he cannot use a map very well

The ship takes good enough care of itself
the cannon and mast are in reasonable order
you don't need to worry about maintenance
as the ratings will take care of that

Will you be my ship's captain
someone needs to take command
get us to your home port
where we can unload our cargo safely

Tuesday, November 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 14 December 2016

ok, sport. i'll put this into Section A of December's showcase. thanks. if i were to be your ship's captain, all 'hands' would be lost! ! ! ! probably feet also. along with the damned ship! ! oh! the topic is love. hmm? you are looking for someone to love you AND run your life? ? good luck finding a good one, my friend. bri :) don't forget sailor's insurance.

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