43 A Wish

Rating: 3.5

A dawn like a smile, heavenly lovely
A day sunny allthrough, very nicely
End of the road, light lit turn
And offer of prosperity, sooth the burn

Dreadful act all around, full of struggles
Dreadful dream all through night, thy rubbles
Leave alone the Wisdom, lost with swords
Take care my brothers and sisters, stay inn roads

Where is the peace? Lost in the minds of rulers
Where thy prosperity? Got with millionaires!
Surge up, my friends, the future waits for you
Purge out the misfortunes, long road to move for you

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aaron Tate 05 May 2008

Ah, the truth be it, peace and prosperity never be in the same sentence, unless your saying they are never together. :) Excellent Write.

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Nkululeko Mdudu 05 May 2008

lovely write, you're very talented.

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Six Three 29 April 2008

enjoyed it man. keep it up

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C.R. Clark 27 April 2008

A very nice write, my friend. Thank you and best wishes. Richard

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Ency Bearis 26 April 2008

nicely done.... Ency Bearis

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