ମିଳନ ର ରଙ୍ଗ- 44 (Milana Ra Ranga -044/Odia Poem) Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

ମିଳନ ର ରଙ୍ଗ- 44 (Milana Ra Ranga -044/Odia Poem)

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ରାତି ର ଅନ୍ଧାରେ, ତମେ ମୋର

ନୀଳ ଜହ୍ନ, ଜୋଛନାଫଲ୍ଗୁ ରେ ।।


ସାରା ଉପତ୍ୟକା ମୋର ଆତ୍ମା ର ଇଲାକା-

ହୁତୁ ହୁତୁ ଜଳୁଥାଏ ତୁମ ଚାହାଣୀ ରେ ।।

ମିଳନ ର ରଙ୍ଗ- 44 (Milana Ra Ranga -044/Odia Poem)
Friday, December 8, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: longing,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A poem for someone, by someother and of someone. I wrote it on Prativa's request to write a love poem for my darling but in an acrostic form featuring her.
For the last time in life I had done this to appease somebody this way.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prativa Rani 09 December 2017

ରାତି ର ଅନ୍ଧାରେ, ତମେ ମୋର ନୀଳ ଜହ୍ନ, ଜୋଛନାଫଲ୍ଗୁ ରେ ।। So beautiful lines from a lovely poem.

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Mayurakshi Ojha 02 March 2018

ରାତି ର ଅନ୍ଧାରେ, ତମେ ମୋର ନୀଳ ଜହ୍ନ, ଜୋଛନାଫଲ୍ଗୁ ରେ ।। So beautiful lines from a lovely poem. Thanks for the sharing. Eva 10++++++++

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Mayurakshi Ojha 02 March 2018

ରାତି ର ଅନ୍ଧାରେ, ତମେ ମୋର ନୀଳ ଜହ୍ନ, ଜୋଛନାଫଲ୍ଗୁ ରେ ।। So beautiful lines from a lovely poem. Thanks for the sharing. Eva

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 18 December 2017

ଭାରି ଭାରି ଲାଗୁଥିବା, ନିଃସଙ୍ଗତାମୟ ରାତି ର ଅନ୍ଧାରେ, ତମେ ମୋର ନୀଳ ଜହ୍ନ, ଜୋଛନାଫଲ୍ଗୁ ରେ ।। ସାରା ଉପତ୍ୟକା ମୋର ଆତ୍ମା ର ଇଲାକା-wow nice poem sir thanks 10+++++++++++

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 11 December 2017

Thanks sir very romantic poem10++++++++++

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Prativa Rani 09 December 2017

ରାତି ର ଅନ୍ଧାରେ, ତମେ ମୋର ନୀଳ ଜହ୍ନ, ଜୋଛନାଫଲ୍ଗୁ ରେ ।। So beautiful lines from a lovely poem. 10+++++ Rani

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