5 Rhyming Haikus Poem by Peter S. Quinn

5 Rhyming Haikus

Rating: 5.0


1
Darkish red red rose
In the evening spring of glows
A petal drop goes

2
What lies there beside?
In its winter wear and glide
Thoughts pounder abide

3
Little seed between
Now in summer beauty seen
Air a friend has been

4
Rainbow here to long
In a winter frosty song
White in gray still strong

5
Spring is still coming
In kitty dreams and longing
And barrels humming

Saturday, May 29, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku,longing,rainbow,red,spring,winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Hoffman 17 March 2016

These are beautiful. Someone recently told me that Haiku were not supposed to rhyme, but that is they way I have been doing it. I am just learning.

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John Kent 03 September 2017

A RHYMING HAIKU IS SO MUCH HARDER TO DO BY SOMEONE LIKE YOU. J.A.Kent © 2/9/2017 _______________________

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John Kent 03 September 2017

A RHYMING HAIKU IS SO MUCH HARDER TO DO BY SOMEONE LIKE YOU. J.A.Kent © 2/9/2017

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lolejSJHsdmsdm D 30 October 2020

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Panagiota Romois 14 October 2020

Simply lovely 5 stars

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Someone 17 April 2019

It's cool I really like it make up some more. I like reading it but there is only 5

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hgvhdvavcszdu 13 October 2018

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Nunya Bizness 19 March 2018

In number three the second line has 9 syllables not 7 which means that it's not a valid Haiku poem

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