1
Darkish red red rose
In the evening spring of glows
A petal drop goes
2
What lies there beside?
In its winter wear and glide
Thoughts pounder abide
3
Little seed between
Now in summer beauty seen
Air a friend has been
4
Rainbow here to long
In a winter frosty song
White in gray still strong
5
Spring is still coming
In kitty dreams and longing
And barrels humming
A RHYMING HAIKU IS SO MUCH HARDER TO DO BY SOMEONE LIKE YOU. J.A.Kent © 2/9/2017
A RHYMING HAIKU IS SO MUCH HARDER TO DO BY SOMEONE LIKE YOU. J.A.Kent © 2/9/2017 _______________________
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It's cool I really like it make up some more. I like reading it but there is only 5
In number three the second line has 9 syllables not 7 which means that it's not a valid Haiku poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
These are beautiful. Someone recently told me that Haiku were not supposed to rhyme, but that is they way I have been doing it. I am just learning.