Oft in the morn with a mist on the web
Where the fox over fields homeward stray
Awake now the birds for a chorus at dawn
Asleep in their beds children stay
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I'm thinking that you sir have had much exposure to farms! I loved this one...it had a very pleasant and relaxing tone all the way through. A nice perspective...walking in another animals...shoes...er..umm...hooves? ! Hugs, Dee
A delightful find and a real pleasure to read David. I love the way you have compiled it, lovely flow and imagery. Well done indeed. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
David this is such a good rolling pace, and very jauntily takes us around the beautifully rhymed farmyard. Excellent.
Lovely piece with good use of metaphors and rhymes I love reading it my 10
Well you took me to the farm yard among the chucks and sheep, a nice feeling reading this poem All Well, regards Ken e Hall