Friday, August 29, 2008

.7. All Well Comments

Rating: 4.8

Oft in the morn with a mist on the web
Where the fox over fields homeward stray
Awake now the birds for a chorus at dawn
Asleep in their beds children stay
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David Threadgold
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Ken E Hall 21 September 2008

Well you took me to the farm yard among the chucks and sheep, a nice feeling reading this poem All Well, regards Ken e Hall

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Dee Daffodil 07 September 2008

I'm thinking that you sir have had much exposure to farms! I loved this one...it had a very pleasant and relaxing tone all the way through. A nice perspective...walking in another animals...shoes...er..umm...hooves? ! Hugs, Dee

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Ernestine Northover 02 September 2008

A delightful find and a real pleasure to read David. I love the way you have compiled it, lovely flow and imagery. Well done indeed. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Fay Slimm 30 August 2008

David this is such a good rolling pace, and very jauntily takes us around the beautifully rhymed farmyard. Excellent.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 29 August 2008

Lovely piece with good use of metaphors and rhymes I love reading it my 10

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