-: 7 Years Have Passed: - Poem by Srijita Mondal
-: 7 Years Have Passed: -
I sat in a corner of my dark room,
perpetual darkness with infernal chaos,
A lost soul with a viscous brain and heart, tormented without cause unknown to my being,
I was watching as a lonely witness,
My own self deserting me, futility...
Like stagnant water with
Rotten leaves,
No one was seen and unseen was my dream,
I was lost, so lost in darkness and room,
No thought came to find me out of Myself, searching was tiring and no wave was formed,
Even no wish to discover myself,
From the deepest dungeon bevel world,
Nothing arose in me to assert Self,
A vagrant soul and a vagabond mind,
With no direction to make my journey,
Only monotony the solidified ding,
I was preparing for myself as One,
Lost and lost within grave of self delusion.
Instantly a ray came onto my Being,
And a flame from inside my fed up self,
The self that was consumed burned with pain,
my being with unknown fire and Joy startled,
Looking at the flame
I felt love with woe,
For an unknown state of recognition,
He, a magnetic force,
A sweet serenity,
and a childish joy...
I fell without fail with strange reverence,
Fell, fell and fell, , ,
Not in hell, but in Love,
And Love
Then became my ladder to stand,
From the deep chasm it took my vatic soul;
Into the Sunlight and the open Air,
The wide and uninterrupted space of
SKY,
The Space of my inner being and my Life.
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AFTER A MONTH COMPARE BOTH VERSIONS FOLLOW THE ONE U ARE BEST AT THEN TAKE THAT STREAM OF LINE THAT IS THEN UR POETIC LINE OR VIBE ASK pg now he also reads lesser of me STALE WE ALL BECOME WHEN THE CURTAIN IS DONE
you may stick to SPIRITUALITY IT ALONE PAYS DIVIDENDS ON PH ASK PG
VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM NOT SEEN MANY WHERE HAVE YOU BEE POETESS CHILD
A poignant bit of verse written with clarity of thought and mind. Really an insightful creation from the heart. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
A beautiful poem. Well-knit. Amazing flow of words. Yes Prabir Gayen Sir is a spiritual teacher his poetry is highly philosophical. Great write!
viscous ** or vicious ***? ** " having a thick, sticky consistency between solid and liquid" *** " deliberately cruel or violent" Line 4, how about: " ....cause, unknown...." OR: " ....cause known..." ? " bevel" ? " vatic**** soul" ? **** " describing or predicting what will happen in the future" a transformation! your outlook AND your looks; did a barber cut it? bri :)
The magic flow of an open heart! Absolutely stunning poetic expression!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 11:18:36 AM # 1.0.0
Similar to the heart felt exhortations of Prabir Gayyem. Whenever deep sadness and pain conspire, a ray of light of inner being shines through despite.
I always enjoy your critical comments.. This poem is an offering to my master Prabir Gayen..I always try to be like him..He is a magnetic person with painful heart, lighted presence and childish simplicity.. Thank you very very much for reading and commenting...