Melvina Germain

Gold Star - 25,246 Points (Sydney, Nova Scotia)

(881) Faded Erection - Poem by Melvina Germain

Dreams of grandeur consumes the hour,
meek to powerful thoughts of mind.
Skin unfolding erect and smooth,
confident and sure, I beckon her mine.

Embracing, sensuously loving,
passionately arousing time after time.
My powerful masterpiece fades away,
wrinkled, crushed seen better days.

A change takes place, in the blink of an eye.
Poor shrinking me wishes I could die.
Fever of the moment, frozen in time.
embarrassment, no excuses come to mind.

Face burning crimson red, I slowly move away.
This night I’ll not forget, I long for the light of day.


Comments about (881) Faded Erection by Melvina Germain

  • (3/14/2007 4:59:00 PM)

    March 9 2009? ? A vision of the future Melvina. Rigor mortis at best can last for only four days.
    Rigourously written.
    Not stiff in the least.
    Humourous and humbling.
    An outstanding feast!
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  • (3/10/2007 12:44:00 PM)

    Melvina, I like the underlying humour in this piece. The flow and the rhythm just dragged you along to the end. I really felt for the poor man in this piece. As David said before me. I think he could do with some Viagra. Beautifully written as always. Thanks for sharing it.
    David
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  • (3/10/2007 12:31:00 PM)

    This guy could use some viagra, don't you think melvina? (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 10, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, January 31, 2011


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